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Love That Isnt Mandatory by ~LacerationGravity:iconLacerationGravity:





She’ll lock herself in her room, a prison of choice
In a deep, damp fog that covers her voice
Because obviously you can’t hear it, the tears gone unseen
Her views on life, love, childish and obscene
She just doesn’t understand, yeah keep telling yourself that
Until you find her on your floor, covered in red and eyes black

So was it worth it?
You turned away from her sorrow, it’s just a phase she’ll get through it
Was it worth it when you found out so suddenly
That a funeral would paint over where a sweet sixteen should be?

He cries alone in a mansion of his own
More than any child could dream of, all his, everything he’s known
A life of doctors and intelligence, towering high above all
But in his ice-cracked empty chest his dreams do nothing but fall

So was it worth it?
The education you gave so he’ll be just like you
Stuck up and stubborn, but no big news
When all he wanted was your love and a chance
To be himself, now showered in a bloodstained romance
Is this worth it?

Instead of yelling, stitch your words shut and listen
Maybe you’ll finally find out what that last puzzle was missing
They didn’t need money, they didn’t need praise, they didn’t need perfection or a cookie-cutter face
They needed identity, love that wasn’t mandatory , just a smile for once
Was it worth it?
Were the lies all perfect?
Or are you still laughing at their childish phase as you stand in the rain at their hand-me-down grave?
©2008-2009 ~LacerationGravity
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Author's Comments

I think a lot of families have a problem with mandatory love.
Comments? Questions? Random outburst? Go for it!

Poem written by and (c) to Me. Please do NOT use without telling me first. Thank you!


Merci Pour Le Venin

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:iconallalone1056:
Wow.. This is really intense.. I like it a lot.

Love you
Novakaine

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:iconlacerationgravity:
Thank you very much

Loves
Dominik

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This has to be my favorite poem by you. It really hits a personal note with me.I love the concept and the way you worded it. Absolutely brilliant and a :+favlove: It reminds me of one of my poems called Mute [link]

If you dont mind, when you get the chance, maybe you can check out my poems in my gallery and tell me what you think. Dont rush or anything. Again amazing job:clap:

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:iconlacerationgravity:
Thank you! I'm really happy you could relate with it ^^ And thanks for the favs! :hug:

I would LOVE to! When I get some time to readthem, I definatly will! ^^

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If you want boobs, man, I support that. I support that like a bra.
:iconbabyfae:
My pleasure:hug: They are all really good. Keep up the amazing work

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When you look in the mirror and don't like what you see, you can find out first hand what its like to be me.

Club I'm in ~amateur-manips
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:iconlacerationgravity:
Thank so much!! I'll try =-D :hug:

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If you want boobs, man, I support that. I support that like a bra.

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